Post by pyra250 on Sept 25, 2005 7:24:14 GMT -5
Well, since someone forced me to join, I suppose I'll post something. xD This is a song I wrote not too long back...tell me what ya think will ya? It's still a bit rough...
What is it I feel?
They said that paradise wasn’t real,
It only existed inside my mind
But when I look into your loving eyes
Paradise is the only thing that I find
They said that love was a figurative emotion,
Not really what you felt inside your heart
But how can they know what I truly feel
If this isn’t love then it’s a start
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
They say it’s all in my head,
The way I walk in air
The butterflies in my stomach
Really are not there
These emotions they say aren’t real
Just a product of too much thought
If so, you’re the thing always on my mind
More happiness than can be bought
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
The lightness of your touch,
The pounding of my heart
The sweat that starts to pour,
The pain when we’re apart
The ache of each and every day
That you must be away
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
Haha...after reading it again I see how bad it is. xD It's prolly a good thing my writing's improved since this.
What is it I feel?
They said that paradise wasn’t real,
It only existed inside my mind
But when I look into your loving eyes
Paradise is the only thing that I find
They said that love was a figurative emotion,
Not really what you felt inside your heart
But how can they know what I truly feel
If this isn’t love then it’s a start
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
They say it’s all in my head,
The way I walk in air
The butterflies in my stomach
Really are not there
These emotions they say aren’t real
Just a product of too much thought
If so, you’re the thing always on my mind
More happiness than can be bought
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
The lightness of your touch,
The pounding of my heart
The sweat that starts to pour,
The pain when we’re apart
The ache of each and every day
That you must be away
And when the world turns
I think of how you move me
When I look into your eyes
I think of how you lose me
In your dreamy face
When you smile that way
You light up my world
When you dance with me
My love and fears unfurl
In your simple grace
They say love isn’t real
Then what is it I feel?
Haha...after reading it again I see how bad it is. xD It's prolly a good thing my writing's improved since this.
