Time for a New kind of Art

[RDKitsune]

Well, since we have drawings and such up now, I figured maybe we could get some writing. So, here's something I wrote durring those three wonderful days I was visiting Mayfield ^__^;; It's a song titled "I'm Changing". Sucky title, I know, but deal. Please Please PLEASE let me know what you think!!!

Shadows in the Moonlight
Eating my reflection
Breaking my soul into a million pieces

Whispering my tourments
Haunting my solidities
I can't fight back this darkness anymore

I'm changing
Rearranging
And when the night is done
I hope you'll see what I've become
My head is pounding
My mind is reeling
The world's breaking on tears
While I'm drowning in your fears

Light won't kill this darkness
Great shadows come to burry me
Nightmares stealing away my every breath

I need your helping hand
I need a rock to help me stabd
Your faroff words can't help support my disintegrating self

I'm breaking
Suffocating
And when this life is done
I hope you'll see what you've become
My world is crashing
My life is fleeting
I'm tearing down my barriers
I'm fighting back what I've become

Changing
Rearranging
Breaking
Suffocating

I'm drifitng from obscurity
Serrated by your secrets
Casting out redemption
It's settling to know I've lost it all

I'm breaking
Suffocating
And when this life is done
I doubt you'll see what you've become
My world is crashing
My life is fleeting
I'm tearing down my barriers
I'm fighting back what you've become

I'm changing
Rearranging
And when the night is done
I doubt you'll see what I've become
My head is pounding
My mind is reeling
The world's breaking on tears
While I'm drowning in your fears

[dajoji]

very nice...

[RDKitsune]

Well at leats someoen likes my crap of writing. Thanks Dajoji ^__^;;; I hope... -.-;;

[dajoji]

It is very good

[Leon P]

If I read poetry I'd prob'ly read it:) but most of the time poetry bores me. sorry.

[RDKitsune]

¬_¬ Suuuure.... That's what they all say.... Plus, it's more or less a song rather than poetry xP

[Leon P]

lol